Writing essay seemed to come easier to right about than the first, I felt more freedom and my own voice. I think my writing benefited in the way of story telling and having my voice in writing. I would prefer Personal narrative writing because I get to youse my thoughts and have more freedom. I …
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5 titles
1.Chasing freedom 2.Choice to be made 3.The game that was fun 4.player or student 5. slave to a sport
in class 10/29
I learned from others that there were many sides to the situation. There were those who felt as I did, ones who were neutral, and ones who lived for it. I discovered in myself my true desires and what I knew what would be the right decision would be. I learned that the world is …
Rough draft 2 essay 2
Nick K. Satterly Janel Spencer WRT 101S16 October 2019 High School FootballI didn’t always hate playing football I used to love the game and dream of continuing to go up levels. From youth football at the age of seven all the way up to eighteen my senior year of high school, I played. High school …
in class 10/23
Work: I work in food service, that being a restaurant that’s main focus is pizza and pasta. It is a well lit place during the day but is dim at night. There is a pretty big floor space full of tables and chairs as well as an open kitchen. There is also a separate door …
Sensory list
Weather: Some days during practice it would get so hot the field became an oven. Travel: Sleeping on the bus was close to trying to sleep during a firefight. Hits: I would hit my head and see stars. mental state: The locker room became a mental asylum. class: The thought of practice always was sitting …
Character discription
My friend Sean: body type: Tall, lanky, musclar Height: 6,1 Hair: black Eyes: Blue Descriptions: Squared face, mild facial hair, big feet. Style: Casual, Trendy Interactions: Talked a lot about hating football, talks with hand gesters, eyes part of communication, stands normal, fidgets when stressed or nervous, when speaking mostly stays to topic Key phrases: …
Details for essay 2
Who: Me, Family, Friends, Coaches What: Me not wanting to dedicate my time to football When: Mostly all of high school Where: Home, School, Camps. Why: A huge inner struggle on if I keep going or do the thing I felt like I was missing. Smell: Grass, Smelly pads Touch: The field/grass/dirt Taste: Rubber mouth …
Essay 2 outline
I. Exposition Characters; Me, Family, Friends, Coaches, Teachers Setting; My home, School, Camps Situations; Not enjoying the sport and wanting to be free Background; Playing for many years II. Inciting event; Starting the summer going into junior year. III.Rising actions; Time consumption, Coach troubles, Fed up IV. Climax; Having a mental break down about what …
Native essay ideas
High school sports, I would go over how it affected my life and changed my perspective on things as well as lessons it has taught me. Video games, I would go over the role it’s played in my life and how long its been around in my life. Family life, I would go over first …
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